Destiny depends on who you are,
Where you are and what you are.
Life is full of surprises, I agree,
But it curtails the liberty of being free.
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Penned with perfection. You have the seeds of great poetry in you. Keep it up. CP
well im impressed you were only 12 when you wrote that! its a really nice poem that makes you see the bigger picture of life and look at it positively. Its simple but still grips u in. nice flow. check out some of my poems if you fancy, u dont have to comment if u dont want but wud appreciate it as im always trying to improve my writing. :)
that's good and an interesting way of looking at life..........you know i knew nothing about english and opoems when i was 12.....haha........u r amazing... excellently done........... ;)