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that's good and an interesting way of looking at life..........you know i knew nothing about english and opoems when i was 12.....haha........u r amazing... excellently done........... ;)

cool one if written at 12

Penned with perfection. You have the seeds of great poetry in you. Keep it up. CP

Interesting write, love with 10+++

well im impressed you were only 12 when you wrote that! its a really nice poem that makes you see the bigger picture of life and look at it positively. Its simple but still grips u in. nice flow. check out some of my poems if you fancy, u dont have to comment if u dont want but wud appreciate it as im always trying to improve my writing. :)