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this is a good poem about life....

It is a fantastic peom! has true meaning, well done!

'Life is a circle going round and round Life continues after we’re in the ground…' Excellent write Janay. I love this poem. Beautiful observation on life.10 with love.

Your attitude toward life is very cynical for one so young, but your poem expresses your adolescent disappointment very well. Might I suggest you use the word 'beginning' instead of 'begin' in line four? Your final couplet is a most satisfying conclusion to the poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I like how on some of the lines it goes from a negative to a positive, it works well.x