Life Comments

The last stanza speaks all truth....great thought portrayed...10

I like this poem is realy nice and express feeling that some people might feel....good job

being a youngster, this poem is really close to my heart....everybody keep on telling us that we r free....but are we? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Very nice. Enjoyed last stanza most.

Ummm...that was a joke? OK. Cheers. Subroto

Good write......................

I don't think we are puppets in the hands of cruel fate. We design out our fates, don't we? Our deeds turn out to be our fates. If we do good, our fates will turn out to be good and if we do bad, it will turn out to be the other way, full of misery.