Life is short, life is sour,
Slowly marching by the hour.
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very nice poem, has a great essence, my name is calder too! : P
excellent rhythm and rhyme and i like the alternation between positive and negative, its very balanced
I love the rhyming.. it makes your poem just flow off the lips..love it ~Hazel
I am going to recite this poem for UIL