Wednesday, May 21, 2008

Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is short, life is sour,

Slowly marching by the hour.
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Sharisce Jackson 16 December 2014

I am going to recite this poem for UIL

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Alicia Cross 28 May 2009

I love the imagery in your poems. :)

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Carly Bachor 06 May 2009

very impressive i like it alot. very true. and sincere.

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Kelsee Vandiver 31 March 2009

i thought it was fantastic very good poetry!

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Max Calder 24 November 2008

very nice poem, has a great essence, my name is calder too! : P

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Wandering Scarlet 27 October 2008

excellent rhythm and rhyme and i like the alternation between positive and negative, its very balanced

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Evaughn Gray 23 May 2008

I love the rhyming.. it makes your poem just flow off the lips..love it ~Hazel

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