Friday, April 25, 2008

Life Comments

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As the day ends, the orange ball in the west,
Keeps me queered and I try to quest.

It dangles low and ready to rise tomorrow,
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Prof Dr Pradeep Kumar Mohanty
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Chitra - 10 August 2008

a nice write, emotional in tone!

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Abha Sharma 25 April 2008

I feel this pain in all your poems... a well structured poem with nature accompanying the pathos....but this is the way of the world...life goes on...waits for none...those in heaven are now always with us...

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