Friday, May 27, 2005

Life Comments

Rating: 2.8

Life is great, it's a treat to us all
Don't spoil it, you don't want to fall

The sun will come out to watch what you do
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Joella Cousins
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Rebecca Wright 14 April 2006

it's short, but it makes the message really clear. plus its not depressing like a lot of poems can be

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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 29 May 2005

simple but its message is clear. great job!

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