Saturday, December 19, 2009

Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tell me please why do i have to live you if there ain't a reason to carry on,
show me please the way to live you with content only because i am surviving,
why is it that sorrow is more than joy? , why there are so many reasons to cry?
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rinki nandy
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Raw and ribid with a touch of realism.

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Becca Leonard 28 December 2009

this poem is absolutly amazing! ! ! I love it!

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Kobik William 25 December 2009

life is always weird so 'shut ur eyes tight and open your ears wide so u might see clearer'. But I must say that was a gr8 poem worth a 10 from me.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 December 2009

A straightforward realistic person-qua-person view on life has been described nicely in this poem. Keep on writing, rinki, you may get some answers about life but it's very difficult to have a straightforward clue or answer. Best Wishes. Naseer

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