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I wrote something similar when I was groaning over a boy at school, when my parents lives were in tatters, when I lost a man I loved very much, I didn't know I loved him till he went though. I wouldn't change a thing though sweetheart. And neither will you. Keep writing your heart out.

A good write Frankie, well done and thanks for sharing it. David

This is great Frankie..a tour de force. I love the way it runs madly along and the whole structure of it and the whole list thing and what's in the listing. Very enjoyable and very lovely and once more I agree with you whole heartedly! love donall

Frankie, I like this; it wears a smile.

very lovely poem great write good job