Tuesday, April 10, 2007

Life Comments

Rating: 3.5

Freeverse, mostly
Jumble of actions
Mostly thoughtless, directionless,
Hardly worth noting or reading but
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Daniel Nairn
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Rajesh Thankappan 31 December 2014

Until I tire and leap beyond the walls back into freeverse Loved that way you presented this poem. Thoughtfully written.

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R. S. Farris 23 April 2007

hey, i like this one; can relate

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Esther Leclerc 11 April 2007

Fantastic meditation here, deserving of much more than a casual read or two! Love these lines in particular: 'A structure to my life; a meaning found/Such purpose, depth I love and yet I'm bound'. It is well to know oneself... I'll come back to this and others soon. Esther : ]

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Daniel Nairn

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