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You are the mortal goddess, Oh! Present,
Of the stupendous ocean of immortal time.
Though devoid of power for granting boon
Worshipped dedicatedly and devotedly
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What a beautiful description of life woven in a wonderful poem. Stunning poetic expressions. A great read as always!
Your poem is beautiful and deep. Thank you for sharing.
Each and every stanza stands out adorned with crystalline images and wonderful poetic expressions. Yes, life is just waves of the endless ocean of time. Top Score and to my favorites.
A beautiful poem on life. Brilliant thoughts to ponder about. Very discerning write.
The first and third stanzas strikingly say the truth...on the whole an inspiring life poem
The galloping waves devastate and scatter The castle you build on the mortal bubbles....fascinating expression. Loved this poem on life. Merry Christmas to you sir. Stay always happy and blessed!
The galloping waves devastate and scatter The castle you build on the mortal bubbles......like those poetic lines so this beautiful poem very much.
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7/30/2025 6:03:47 PM # 1.0.0
A journey in life is magnificently painted on the beautiful canvas of this poem adorned with abounding images and great poetic lines. Powerful and inspirational write.