Friday, September 9, 2016

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The stage of human emerge
So on the game of evolution begin
We have century to live
Hardly take decade to thrive
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Tandin Dorjee
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Phurpa Wangdi 24 September 2016

life indeed is a dream. nicely woven into a poem. great!

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Tandin Dorji 10 September 2016

Thanks sir this just the start and I need someone to edit my poem. Will be much gald uf you could go through and make comments so that I will be emcourage to Write more poems.

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Kelly Kurt 09 September 2016

A deeply thoughtful poem, Tandin. Thank you

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