Life Comments

An harvest of love...we shall make life a harvest of love...... this is my prayer to you. let all the inhibitions go.. let us make it real love. hatred kills you.....remembrance of the wounds kill you...... let us love dear poet. dev

Wow! That made me sit up and listen. Exceptionally well written which is important in writing a poem. But more than that, your style built up to an emotional climax in a philosophical poem. In other words, we need to hear your voice and we need to hear it often.

O life; pain we must enjoy and gain that shouldn't drive us insane. it is a great ability to accept and take all that is negative... all pains and sufferings and then go on. such men and women will achieve success. tha nkyou for this great idea. tony

let us have more of your poems, Joseph, if they are as good as this one. Tom Billsborough

Life is not very smooth always. Nice work.