Life Comments

Two magnificent powerful lines. Very inspiring write. Brilliantly penned.10+++

Indeed it was at a miraculous moment that we were brought into life and our mission is to shape our own destiny in tune with the creator's plans! Brevity is once again proved to be the soul of wit!

I do love your use of alliteration. This one is short but very effective. Well done, sir.

A miraculous moment of magnificence- - excellent- -thanks for sharing- -

Life is magnificently expressed in just two lines! A wonderful little inspirational poem! Loved reading it..10

Brevity at its best. Beautiful and powerful lines.

Yes, life mingles with man's destiny! Thanks for sharing, Simon!

A lot said in a few words. Life described in beautiful words. Life is truly a magnificent miracle. Alliteration of D sound in deep deluge of destiny sounds very pleasant.

Life is definitely miraculous and this dances with destiny of action. Very fine drafting shared on really.10

Powerful and captivating write about life it is a dance to embrace the power that is given to us to fulfil our destiny! Thanks for sharing Howard!

I couldn't agree more with the poet.

Pungent writing.....

Miraculous indeed. Thank You Howard and New Year wishes to you.