Life Comments

a thoughtful poem of what it entails to being? alive! ...............well written.

Rowing a boat, Gently over the falling rains. Down the floods, It's meandering shaping us, Spiritual or Irreverent, Superstitious or factual, beautiful use of words and phrases bringing to the reader your own philosophy of life. like your poems

Choices make our lives. Such a powerful perspective expressed in this very positive poem. Well done my friend!

The first law of nature is self preservation. A well articulated piece of poetry, elegantly penned in poetic diction with conviction. An insightful poem nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Shideshe.

Each one and everything! ! Nice piece of work.

With a common mission, Each one and everything, Rowing a boat, Gently over the falling rains. the beauty of life and its determined actions that lead one through life. thank you dear poetess. tony

Thanks dear poet for reading.I'm inspired.

Life is amazing no matter the ups and downs. Great piece about life.

this is good. life explained in a brilliant way...I like this poem

Lovely lines about life!

Upon which our manifestation is examined, Living or non living, Spiritual or Irreverent, Superstitious or factual, Life is and will be, All that's fundamentally needed. beautifully structured piece enjoyed reading thank you for sharing please keep those words flowing even more

LIfe in its varied aspects, its beauty, its wonder, nature which leads one to spiritual heights.. all that is clearly pictured in this beautiful poem on life. thank you dear Poetess. tony