Friday, October 23, 2015

Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is a mystery,
Adventure, a maze
Nobody knows what will happen,
But the only people who know their future,
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Daniel Serjani
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Tristan Machado 21 November 2015

Awesome poem. Very deep. Please read my poems.

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Rajnish Manga 28 October 2015

Yes, we agree with every single word that you have utilized in the poem to show what LIFE is. Thanks. I would like to quote a couple of lines: When you have a goal / Something that drives you,

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Kevin Fang 26 October 2015

Hi Daniel! Your poem was great! Please write more, and also, I will tell you something in class.

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 October 2015

______________________________ ''[..] the only people who know their future, Are the ones who study, Who train 10 hours a day The ones who want success [..] that is the definition of LIFE '' ______________________________ mm.. it sounds you're a lucky man, Daniel, as you know what LIFE is.. thanks for having revealed the deep secret of life.. but maybe, it is a bit too simple, isn't it? ;) anyway, WELCOME AT POEM HUNTER.. and keep on writing Blessings

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 October 2015

. mm.. you're a lucky man, Daniel.. you know what LIFE is.. thanks for having revealed the deep secret of life.. but maybe, it is a bit too simple, isn't it? ;) anyway, WELCOME AT POEM HUNTER.. and keep writing Blessings

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Kevin Fang 26 October 2015

Right!

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