Monday, August 25, 2014

Life Comments

Rating: 4.4

In between the birth and death
Life is flowing like a river
We are fine drawn lines on water
The lines vanishing in a wink.
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Mallika Achuthan Menon
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Chinedu Dike 29 August 2020

A profound philosophical reflection written with clarity of thought and mind. A work of an intricate mind.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2020

Lying, cheating, hurting become mutual As they are usual rituals for each one here. Death always acts like a senseless joker can intervene anywhere anytime! Truths of life explained very poetically from experience. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2015

Of course life is flowing like a river in between the birth and death. We have to enjoy the fruit of karma(resolve) . Dear Mallika, a true picture you have presented nicely and vividly that any one will admit. A brilliant poem. .......10

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 17 October 2014

Your poem depicts the various aspects of life quite beautifully.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 05 October 2014

In between birth and death hanging the life. Nicely expressed about life. Beautiful life poem ever shared on this desk. Nice, Nice.

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Somanathan Iyer 01 September 2014

As long illusion enthralls our wisdom, we keeping moving blindly with all sorts of materialistic qualities. A nice poem well expressed!

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Sekharan Pookkat 29 August 2014

there is a saying- nothing in this world is mine- (ethem na mama) There are some people who live for others and sacrifice their life for the cause of others.

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So true...wise words

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