In between the birth and death
Life is flowing like a river
We are fine drawn lines on water
The lines vanishing in a wink.
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Lying, cheating, hurting become mutual As they are usual rituals for each one here. Death always acts like a senseless joker can intervene anywhere anytime! Truths of life explained very poetically from experience. tony
Of course life is flowing like a river in between the birth and death. We have to enjoy the fruit of karma(resolve) . Dear Mallika, a true picture you have presented nicely and vividly that any one will admit. A brilliant poem. .......10
Your poem depicts the various aspects of life quite beautifully.
In between birth and death hanging the life. Nicely expressed about life. Beautiful life poem ever shared on this desk. Nice, Nice.
As long illusion enthralls our wisdom, we keeping moving blindly with all sorts of materialistic qualities. A nice poem well expressed!
there is a saying- nothing in this world is mine- (ethem na mama) There are some people who live for others and sacrifice their life for the cause of others.
A profound philosophical reflection written with clarity of thought and mind. A work of an intricate mind.