Monday, December 9, 2013

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The tears in my eyes are making my vision blurry
I wipe them away and smile so you don't start to worry
Don't think it's nothing even if that's what I say
Because the things that go wrong aren't just from that day
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Cheyenne WinfreyYoung
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A Waltz For Zizi 09 December 2013

It's twisted but I like it. It resembles my heart. You should change some words or they'll remove your poem for profanity. I had some poems removed too. Keep up the good work.

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