Life Comments

Life is mystery, yes as the story of it written for us, and kept in envelope...how to read our journey when it enclosed to eye unseen it, a passion to know but sometimes better hidden, mystery spice the flavor for the next adventure... Man fallen from sky to the earth, as if we are like the droplets of the rain...to fall on sea surface or desert lace or green place...how we can change our destiny then? could we? ...i pick a red paint to point on canvas, where i will drop the redness....to make my painting beautiful...as mystery will resolves later but now it remains in present...How could i grasp the meaning of life while i am still a beginner to understand it's trick and surprises.. But Oh Lord, mystery is an art for passion grow, for fears hide, for happy after surprise...and for enigmatic got meaning, as life is mystery...and remain unsolved mathematically but journey_Soul

man is a fallen god very true indeed. having a lots of godly traits and desires. great philosophy expressed in this poem and yet no philosophy at all. good write

great job............................ a nice poetry...............!