Ripples form,
widen,
disappear,
I like to use the word 'merge'
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I see the repeating patterns of life and of nature. What was it you saw that made you to write thus?
Finish is fantastic… I see the stars/descending into the ocean/in silence. Thanks for sharing Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
Great Poem... i was expectin some thing....when i read the title silence... but u got a great angle there... keep them comin peace
Your poems have roots deep down somewhere. This one is simply fantastic. Thanks.
This is a great poem with strong metaphors. Keep writing, good work.