Life Comments

This is a great poem with strong metaphors. Keep writing, good work.

I see the repeating patterns of life and of nature. What was it you saw that made you to write thus?

Finish is fantastic… I see the stars/descending into the ocean/in silence. Thanks for sharing Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

the theme is very deep, nice work.

Great Poem... i was expectin some thing....when i read the title silence... but u got a great angle there... keep them comin peace

i enjoyed, this poem, thank you for sharing.

Your poems have roots deep down somewhere. This one is simply fantastic. Thanks.

great style of writing.