Saturday, June 29, 2013

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The innocence of a child what a beautiful thing,
An untainted mind that sees the good in everything,
That was once me,
Maybe even you,
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Daniel Rangel
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Luciana Isabelle 29 June 2013

very deep meaning.. the sense of frustrated and those feeling, I can feel it right away after reading the first stanza. You're a talented one, so please keep on writing, i'm looking forward for it. p/s: if you have some time, do take a look at my poem too, and leave me a comment. As i'm a newbie here, so there's tons of advice I need to improve on my poem... Thank you! Best regard!

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Daniel Rangel

Daniel Rangel

Salinas, Ca
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