Monday, January 7, 2013

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As a child I dreamt that I was flying,
Invincible, unstoppable and death defying,  
Free as a bird and soaring high,
I watched the world just pass me by,
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Nick Jordan.
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 December 2015

As a child I dreamt that I was flying, Invincible, unstoppable and death defying, Free as a bird and soaring high, I watched the world just pass me by, i can safely i say i left my mark. wonderful ending of the poem with lot of fulfillment and hope. thank you. tony

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Joshua Fegley 07 January 2013

This site sucks sometimes with these comments. Anyway. Good poem Nick.

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Joshua Fegley 07 January 2013

I like it Nick. Truly a realistic poem on life.

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Nicholas Rahming 07 January 2013

I love it. Almost like my poem ' My own way. Please feel free to read it along with my other poems for my future books.

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