Life Comments

Great write, enjoyed every lines and its wise message! Keep writing...A great 10.

''But remember, haunting starts, anguish replays'' great poemo... keep on writing, i m looking forward reading more of your writings.. :)

Very deep and close to the heart, i see, i demand another poem! xD good job, this poem speaks for itself.

a very sad life- well written poem-keep writing

Beautiful poem, a great write.

A purpose, is it not what thou seek? But without a creator thou shall not reap........beautiful and profound. Wonderful work. You have a gift.

A CRIME OF PASSION SINFULLY DISPLAYED very nice! The great poem explores aspects of life.

That's deep

this is good and i enjoyed reading it....your poems is dope

you have a good sense of reasoning. This poem shows it all. Good work

So passionate! I like it.

Outstanding! I'm amazed at your creativity and your ability to play with the words that deliver the idea to the reader's mind. Beautiful work! ! ! 10+++

Beautifuly worded poem, .......

i liked reading it.. though the subject is kind of foreboding, but yes life does pay you back in the same coin... Very good indeed.

You reap what you sow. This is the irrefutable law of nature. Very well written with smooth transition from one verse to another. Keep up the good work. Good bless.

Rich and allusive.Trez bien!