Friday, June 22, 2012

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Life has shut its doors on me.
However hard I pound and knock..
It does not respond.
I long to reach out to the joys and the smiles of life,
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Anita Sehgal
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Joe Breunig 19 June 2014

An enjoyable piece; as you've implied, the battlefield is within the mind, for life continues to move forward under the arrow of time; nicely conceived. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 June 2012

started in sad tone and then hope is planted in the hearts of the readers! Great!

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Marieta Maglas 22 June 2012

nice poem about life, moreover a confession.....

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