Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Life Comments

Rating: 4.7

Life is precious

A gem on the sands of shores.
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Godfrey Morris
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Walterrean Salley 05 November 2016

Godfrey, thank you for this fine composition, portraying the true essence of life. Very insightful. This is one of my favorite subjects, partially because it‘s such a mystery- though we thing ourselves well acquainted with this such phenomenon. Again thank you. PS: In reference to my poem ‘A Sad Comedian, ’ thanks for your kind comments. I’ve just learned that it was recently featured as Poem of the Day.

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A pleasant but powerful perspective on life and living. Well done my friend!

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Albert Ahearn 23 May 2015

A very good poem. It compliments you.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 20 May 2015

Profound with a lot of truth and wisdom. A very remarkable write.

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Uma Ram 23 March 2015

Beautiful sir, very inspiring...

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Laurie Abc 16 August 2012

Very inspirational, adds a clear picture in ones mind. Short and sweet to the point

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Heather Wilson 17 May 2012

So well said, life never to be regained, wasted or used to the best of our ability, a wonderful poem and thought here.

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Valerie Dohren 16 May 2012

A great poem, sentiments beautifully expressed. Well done.

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Craig Farrell 11 May 2012

i enjoy the simplicity of this... and simplicity is not a bad thing at all. life is the beauty of the world very true and if there is no life there is no world of meaning... so to speak.

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Kenebo Rajkumar 11 May 2012

Sometimes worth dying for...........its absolutely true, here i remember we are not immortal.... nice one, outstanding dude.......

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Walterrean Salley 10 May 2012

Beautifully penned. Give new perspectives on the greatest gift ever given to man. Perfect imagery too. I enjoyed. 10

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Enoch John 10 May 2012

Hi Godfrey, Very good imagery utilised in poem.I like the rhythm of the poem

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Life is worth living for. Sometimes worth dying for- nice composition

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Clarence Prince 09 May 2012

I'm no expert when it comes to critique, but I think you've done a lovely job here, Godfrey! Blessings!

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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