Life Comments

An animal does not already know what is to come in the sense that it can thoroughly contemplate the future. For example, a squirrel will gather nuts for the upcoming winter, not because it believes that the future is cold, but because it realizes that soon, "now" is to be cold. Think about that.

I liked this free verse poem of yours. The verses flow naturally like a stream. I am amazed to think how effortlessly you have understood and conveyed the philosophy of life in this poem. From a 17 year old as you are, this is simply superb! I am glad to see that you like to read poems. You stand 7th, as of now, among the Members (of PH) who read most number of poems. Very good! But it's a pity that you have read none of mine.