Sunday, January 22, 2006

Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

Great blessings are bestowed upon mankind
So many in number hard to bear in mind
Yet, as on fate the time carves acerbic remarks
Around the girth of sentiments, the lives wind
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Hareem Z K
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Why does truth have to be edited- Truth the criminal truth Eternally erased like profanity from life’s blackboard Tossed like fritter in seething oil Tossed from cliffs treacherously high But has a way to rebound Unleash un-cuffed it comes to hound Inspired by Shaikh Ayaz’s poem “ Such Wado Dohari A”

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Charles Chaim Wax 01 February 2006

a wise and compassionate narrative showing clearly what's important and what must be done for the heart to find happiness a fine poem

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Hareem Z K

Hareem Z K

Karachi, Pakistan
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