Monday, May 2, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

For every step you take, I will be there
Every time you look my way, I will be there to hold you
I just can't stop loving you,
You are my other half and I won't ever let you go
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Candice Key
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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Lexus Box 02 May 2011

i love it you need to write more

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