Thursday, January 14, 2010

Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is just a mystery,
Sometimes bitter, sometimes sweet as pastry.
Sometimes the path is made of steep hills,
For crossing it you need deep skills.
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Ruchika Batra
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 January 2010

nice write here i like this one mostly the last line

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 January 2010

the poem is good mostly its last line... very fantastic!

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