Monday, October 1, 2012

Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

Places, faces, friends or foe,
Life gathers as we sow,
Dreams scatter as harsh winds blow,
Lovers say their empty words then go,
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Hazel Durham
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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2022

A precious poem.... appreciated

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2022

Loved what you have expressed in the opening two lines

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 October 2020

As we sow, life gathers likewise. Life signifies with much beauty and responsibility. Life gives us certainty. Friends and relatives are our fruits of actions. According to our actions they gather around us. In stillness and calmness life brings us plenty of woe. This poem is amazing. Reading this times again, I fee happy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 December 2019

Life is a great reflection we perceive through places, faces and beauty of nature. Your perception about is outstanding. Thank you very much for sharing this excellent poem.10

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2019

Life as complex as the incoming tides, Sometimes soft and serene /// superb expression about life life rose as well as thorns life drizzling as well as stormy winds life sun rising as well as sun setting down life full moon night as well as moonless night life; actually the name of happy and sorrow together

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Chandini Jaswal 04 July 2019

The poem has summed up life's meaning in such a simple way. Reading it over and over again!

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Dipak Adhya 22 March 2019

Lovers say their empty words then go, Familiar voices we long to hear, well thought provoking thought....t

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Luz Hanaii 24 November 2018

Very well said, love the ending, sounds so peaceful.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2018

Life as complex as the incoming tides, Sometimes soft and serene, More times fast and turbulent, Bringing us plenty of woe, .....so touching and impressive with nice theme. Yes, Life is complex and like incoming tides. A beautiful poem so nicely delineated. My pleasure reading it time and again.

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Chaminda Pushpadewa 09 November 2018

the life is a puzzle that can be answered only friends, family members with the doctrine its true this is a great poem thanks

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Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2018

Life gathers as we sow. Nice poem. I liked it.Thanks for sharing the poem on the site.

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alan brown 26 May 2018

Fantastic Hazel you have a good way with words. thanks for listing Alan

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Very beautiful and meaningful lines. Very good poem.

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Muzahidul Reza 19 February 2018

Life gathers as we sow, ........... yes, dear poet, our deeds say our lives, ....... you have again wrote: Sometimes soft and serene, More times fast and turbulent, yes these are some distinctions of life, but, again I want to rewrite that, ...... Life gathers as we sow, is a great treatment of life, ........... thanks for sharing the poem with us, +++++++ 10

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2017

Our time will come, when we will know, The calm, the stillness, The silence of our souls. a fine poem.. a depiction of life as you see it.......your blessed vision.... thank you dear poetess. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 September 2017

o ur a beautiful poet all know it and I am told you are one of the best Yes all that profess Wish you could read my MOM'S SMILES and see how a mother's charms live for centuries will ye please kindly

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2017

Life is as per our sow. One may enjoy life with full of joy or in grief as per his deeds. But time will come and he will know the calm, stillness and silence of soul. It is a beautiful poem on philosophical base. Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 April 2017

Magnificent! Tranquility in the midst of turbulence. Succinctly profound. A joy to read. Thank you, Hazel.

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Mizzy ........ 05 September 2016

Considering this is such a short poem....it contains copious amounts of wisdom and teaching.....not a word wasted. I loved the rhythm and rhymes also. Thank you Hazel for posting this Gem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 June 2016

Life as complex as the incoming tides, Sometimes soft and serene, yes our time is going to come, silence, peace, inner comfort.......... thank you my dear poetess Hazel . your poems always make me think a lot.... God bless you dear. tony

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