Sunday, December 27, 2009

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life? not worth my tears, not worth my sadness
just waiting for someone to show me what life is really worth,
i wake up every morning wishing you were in my arms then i see her in yours,
as time passes on, the life i have had is gone
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Sandra Wiebe
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Nikunj Sharma 27 December 2009

this is a nice little cute poem..a touch sad though...good flow and the content is quite crisp....just check out for typos in the last line....niks

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Sandra Wiebe

Sandra Wiebe

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