Friday, December 11, 2009
Life Comments
Rating: ★5.0
what do you do
when everything is falling apart
and you are lost
in the dark
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Lucille Martin
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Kesav Easwaran
11 December 2009
life looks dark at times...but every dusk must open out to a dawn...stay there and wait as you said there very poignant Lucille...well structured poem...impressively expressive...10 read my poem- My Dear Red Rose- for a chnge!
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7/30/2025 1:01:31 AM # 1.0.0
Hi Lucille! ! Thanks for commenting on my poems. This poem, though sad, is very well structured. Though at times life seems dark, there is always light at the end of the tunnel. Don't you ever forget that. :) Take care girl, Melanie