We never asked God
May we be born? Did we?
We just knew,
When life was infused into us
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A fantastic dancer, an artist and a wonderful poetess. I admire this multi -faceted genius and lovable person... great! !
A precious poem. I don't know about your dreams but I understand that you are blessed soul.
Are you Roman Catholic? Do you oppose birth control and abortion? ?
Geeta aka TT, Your writng is fine, but we disagree on several points, obviously. That's ok, as long as no one makes a life/death decison for me as happened 74 years ago. bri
I've read at least one novel in which it was found that a 'hanging suicide' was actually a 'murder'. : (
'Have we the right to kill ourselves? Can we not leave it to the Almighty? ' Bri's answers: YES. iF He/She/It is Almighty, God must be sleeping or allows suicide. bri : )
No matter the skill of the painter in stanza two, life can still be almost unbearable at times for some.
(cont.) See my poem: Bri's Mental Health Arrests …[ True! ! ; Suicide; Medium Length; Personal] bri ;)
...may be against the law where one lives and could lead to inconvenint results for one who even mentions the possibility. (cont.)
... after careful consultation/consultation, but acknowledgement of thoughts of suicide (though no threats or attempts have been made....
I DO BELIEVE that suicide is a worthwhile tool, but the decision to kill oneself is best (maybe) made after careful thought and.....
I've lived many years (more than 'enough' for me!) since my 20s. I've been one of the 'lucky ones', with a not-so-bad-life......
I stopped believing in a God/god before I turned 20 y.o. I believe, and in my 20s I DID think: 'I didn't ask to be born.' Since then (cont.)
She must NOT have had 'everything in her favour'. Maybe she decided 'God' made a mistake by causing her to be born.
A shocking sorrowful news...you have rightly said it all with a good advice in the last stanza....feeling very much sorry for that inconsolable parents
I hope your beautiful poem encourages young and old alike to live their life fully no matter what it brings for us.
Life is Like a vast canvas, We have to splash pleasant hues, With good thoughts & actions, To make it a beautiful painting....only an artist like you can express this way dear madam. It's a beautiful poem.