Thursday, March 12, 2015

Lies Our Parents Told Comments

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The lies our parents told us
Were their attempts to keep us safe
And the lies we tell our children
Protect that faith in our mistakes
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Kevin Patrick
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Maria Gonzalez 26 July 2015

This is truth. I quite like your poems. Please check out mine.

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Stephen Katona 31 May 2015

As the wheel of life turns we pass our lies from generation to generation. How cleverly you've raised this topic. No-one can disagree with your message as there will always be something that turns out to be a lie. I like the way you've have emphasized what we must do: 'question', 'stop the wheel', and 'face the facts'. Every poem that raises awareness of a problem should come with a solution.

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