Monday, December 27, 2010

Lies Of Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

the lies i see
it is the pain i fell
the tears i cry
that form from the pain
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Grace DeVon miller
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Kevin Carney 27 December 2010

You have many great lines in this poem. It is really nicely written and flows naturally. Your emotions are so clear in your words.10+

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