Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Lies, Lies, Lies Comments

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I've heard it all before my friend
All the things you tell me
I'm fed up of your games
I'm not stupid I can see
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Steven Iceberg
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Karen Morales 09 June 2009

i can relate to this alot.... very good..xxxx Karen

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Delicate Heart 18 May 2009

nice piece despite its pessimistic ending.I strongly support your decision. As the saying goes 'lies have short legs' and the truth will be out, very tender poem

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Angel Singer-kling 11 May 2009

This poem is awesome! I also can relate to it. Im new at poem writing but I wish I could write poems like that

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Nangula Immanuel 05 May 2009

i love this poem. I can relate too. it is very well written! thanx 4 sharing! N.N.

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