Lies In The Sand- A Poetic Dream Comments
The poet is old, wrinkled
She sleeps after her
Life-long dreams
Head sunk into the cooling sand
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This complex and lovely poem balances sensual delight and terror. A fine job. The words flow even as the message disturbs... achieving a balance that carries the reader along. Excellent and very original - and full of music.
Reading that ^^^ wonderful poem, I cannot believe you are 17..superb! ! Preets
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7/28/2025 11:27:46 AM # 1.0.0
A nice poetic imagination, Lyrael. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks