Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Lies, Deceit, Cheat Comments

Rating: 4.5

I’m never gonna look the same way at you
You were lying when i thought you were true
And yet you still seem to not care about me
Even after i thought you would be
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Twisted Rose
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Rachel Brewer 27 August 2009

Hey, good strong poem, like the structure. keep writing like this! xxx

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Barbara Terry 07 July 2009

You go girl! This is telling it like it is. A definite 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara

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