Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Lies, Damn Lies Comments

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What would we be, he asked
without this tool of tools?
The freedom to be masked
it does extend to fools.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Jerry Hughes 10 May 2006

As the little German in Laugh In would pop up and say, 'verrrrry interesting! '

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kskdnj sajn 09 May 2006

Herbert, the rules do/should change in friendships, or at least honest friendships. Your poem reminds me of my favorite quote: ' It is not our abilities that determine who we are...it is our choices.' A friend who chooses deciet, has shown ones true colours. Thanks for sharing,

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Gina Onyemaechi 09 May 2006

The rhyme makes the poem sound 'deceptively' jolly, Herbs! As to the message, you must know that it's not as black and white as this! ! How are you today anyway, Herbs? Love, Gina.

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Adegbite Aderemi 09 May 2006

This world is built on deceit, you cannot find that not in the world. And thing you asked for is rearly unrealistic. Though, you get someone who will love all for who you are not what you have but... I am very sure it's not a femine. Keep on searching, you'll get one before you pass to the world above. Ha ha ha!

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David Darbyshire 09 May 2006

Nice poem Hurb, Dave

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