Sunday, January 4, 2009

Lies And Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark as midnight, shallow and pale
Trusting her smiles will send you to hell
Cold is her shadow, frozen her heart
Her fake identity will never depart
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T.James Becker
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Dream Catcher 04 January 2009

Oh you've made my Sunday TJ! ! Perfect ryhme and flow, excellent words, great message, ...better stop now or you'll think I love your work! ....10/10/10 as always...*dc* xx

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T.James Becker

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