Tuesday, April 10, 2007

Lies Comments

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All you have to do is look
Everywhere there are lies
Slithering through this world
Turning people evil and sad
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Danielle Noguet
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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 18 April 2007

Wow, there was alot of truth in this poem from beginning to end! Lies do all the things you talked about and make you feel all the things you expressed...your right...but try not to let someone elses lies destroy you so much because unfortunately that is what liars do...they lie! That is why we call them liars... Just remember you are better them him..try not to let him hurt you so much. As for the poem, you did a wonderful job on it, thanx for sharing! Take care of U, =Shelley=

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Fritzgerald Paul 10 April 2007

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