Saturday, November 14, 2020

Lies... Comments

Rating: 5.0

You tell me more lies,
And I listen in kind.
Then you spin me a yarn,
With all truth half blind.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 16 November 2020

Excellent poem Shaun..the person you refer to sounds a lot like Creepy Cummings! I really like the glass metaphor...works very well indeed. It's definitely a thoroughly fine five from me.

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Bryony Sheldon 15 November 2020

There isn't a better feeling than revealing to a liar you know their game- they go into a state of shock and embarrassment, with no idea how to lie themselves out of it.

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