Monday, April 23, 2012

Lies Comments

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your lies are taking centre stage
dripping black/blue in my mind
poison sliding down to my heart
through my lungs
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Simon Collins
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Patti Masterman 13 May 2012

This is an excellent verse, it caught me up in its drama, and startled me with its last admonition, tearing asunder the myth of lies being small, white and kindly intentioned. Simply beautiful.

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