Tuesday, August 16, 2011

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Rating: 4.5

you said you loved me, you said you cared
but now that i think about it, you were never there.
you made a promise, that didn't last long
i caught you in a lie, you didn't think you did anything wrong.
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Amber AandB
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this poem is good, tthings happen like this all the time in relationships wich it the worst thing really. i dont see why ppl would put others in that type of pain. no ome deserves it. no matter what the other did. all they are doing is getting revenge when honestly all they want is 4 the other to feel the same pain they felt. its not a good thing, thats why we shoulds choose our gf/bf, wife/husband, fience, wisely. otherwise we will have just a beat up, ragged, torn apart heart 4 our true love whrn they deserve the best. hearts and love are very fragile we need to becareful with them.4 they are not a game. well done poem. good job.

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Tiffany M... 27 August 2011

Yet again, a beautiful poem... So sad... It reminds me of something that happened to me a while ago. Definitely keep up the good work!

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Elizabeth Grace 17 August 2011

This is good! I like your work.

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