Monday, June 8, 2009

...Lies..... Comments

Rating: 4.9

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Bullets in a Mouth
Dressed in white cloth
Shielding the blame
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Eyan Desir
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rago rago 07 July 2009

certainly lies speak the truth....... how is it possible to write about lies? unless the truth in you sprouts.........

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 June 2009

yes indeed! ! ! ! lies can turn beautiful queens to dreaded serpents... liked this one eyen you said it well! ! ! 10+ with love shan

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A brush whiles he paints A beautiful picture In a ugly frame The flower sweetening Heart's dirty rags Like knives pierce hearts Pouring a stream of joy When uncovered sour lives....beautiful write dear... balanced thought. it is how we live.... read mine' I am disgrace and no separate ways

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Pandian Angelina 19 June 2009

Righteous anger Heartfelt pain Lies when like Truth half dressed Strut about De-robing is not A crime - But As you say a joy! Emotions Beautifully potrayed, Pls read my 'Deception' when you have time. Not so fine as yours maybe, but, heartfelt still the same! Angel.

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Anjali Sinha 18 June 2009

i like the pun on these words 'a beautiful picture in an ugly frame' good write anjali

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

'A beautiful picture In a ugly frame' Wonderful poem on lies.

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Winnie Angel 17 June 2009

its a wonderful piece with much of life in it....winnie

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Sad _eyes 14 June 2009

Thanks a lot i am crying inside my soul i really love it and all of your others as well please keep writting my soul will be yours if you wish to take care of it as well as along with my love as you are a great poet of your own......

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this beautiful poem touched a subjjec in my mind that lies which happen here from some who wqrite 10 but they vote so much less than that..so i write now 10++++while i mean it and i rate same thing in the voting box..well done

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The Dreamer 13 June 2009

Straight to the point a meaningful write 10++++++

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Kristina B; Williams 13 June 2009

i acxtually read this yesterday, but did not mind reading it again.you got my vote

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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 June 2009

The flower sweetening Heart's dirty rags Like knives pierce hearts Pouring a stream of joy.....................wonderful phrasing by words of truth, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing

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Noha El3wdy 13 June 2009

thats very true great, keep up

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 13 June 2009

Love doctor you are proving daily that you are getting matured everyday...well penned the truth.

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Angel's lyre 13 June 2009

GOOOOD! ! ! not a poem but a truth. God bless..

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Antonio Liao 12 June 2009

just a close of eyes leaves everything to dust.....yet! memories to tell lingers on a day of reckoning heart...it stay...everything could be lies, but anything is a pefume of the soul that depart....a lovey poem embodied to an inner passion of truth....thank for sharing...God bless a 10 ++++++++

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very nice poem keep the good work

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~Crystal Midnight~ 12 June 2009

A beautiful picture In a ugly frame nice lines... job well done here. ~Crystal Midnight~

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James Mclain 12 June 2009

some times the artist hides that canvas in an old frame to ward off the guilders that leaf the woods in brushes soft hair..lest the mouth dripps the real image inside parchments flame of cheeked buffed face..iip

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Allan Macli Borges 12 June 2009

indeed a piercing piece... 'pouring a stream of joy / when uncovered sour lives' thanks for the invitation...

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