Tuesday, February 13, 2007

Lies Comments

Rating: 3.5

No one's free of sin 'n lies
Blatant or 'little white' kind
Both oblige mind to agonize
And strike a good soul blind
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Ray Lucero
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Harsh commentary, but hard to argue with this. I like your execution of this short poetic form.

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