Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Lies Comments

Rating: 5.0

Endless lies spewing from an unclean soul
All you thought you saw is no longer there,
The thoughts that passed through your mind
Should never have left you staring into space.
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~ Jon London ~ 18 June 2008

brilliant show of emotion that runs down the page..with great impact....from the heart words speak louder....great piece best wishes Jon.

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rohit sapra 11 June 2008

Wow.....This poem is so amazing which is matched with the appropriate words for an appropriate emotion.

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