Lief Comments

the flow of the poem is very good...u are a deep thinker....but wat i believe is... li fe is love and love is life, And to pursue it, a constant strife, care for thy folk, and how ye revive, to attain all it's affairs in extreme delight! ! ! !

i like this, your views on life are right on. loved the ideals, every word was very true. it was just amazing.

A clear and emphatic message else life should belie. CP