Lie With Me Comments

a beautiful write gentle and sweet feeling to it. love this write

What beautiful quiet images.

Ah! Free verse that says something with great sweetness and purity.A body with soul. So beautiful in expression. If you can can do this well without rhyme, so let it be. WORTH AN 11

As only a poet can paint with words the intense feeling of Love. Very beautiful, Val

exquisitely executed piece beautiful and tender by turns 10/10 Thanks for sharing BB : O)

It is a romantic flutter of high intensity love...... Hope there is oasis in the desert of this love and mere mirages won`t still seduce the tender love.

Superb! ! ! ! Top markssss

Surrendering dark for a fresh hope, that what your poem sounds...so gently come and convinced heart to calm Val_Soul

this is love wonderful simple love

Now that's what I'm talkin about, love, love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love

Before it is too late, let us hasten up! sealing the togetherness with moist lips and eager breaths''.... An intense romantic aura surrounds the poem! !

A simple poem that speaks of great love! Wonderful, Valerie!

Its an exquisite composition and pleasure reading through.Its also the title of a British English film featuring love stories of London and the percussions of togetherness of an english woman who by chance fell in love with an english man in club, took a job for a family dream but the man was in the turmoil of womanizing and a decision hard to reckon with for a family.Watched that in 2008 and that too in London itself and tried to experience the pain and pleasure.Your poetry added valour and voice to the feminine character.

A beautiful poem as always.

Another brilliant poem with good imagery.

So beautiful with stunning imagery that caresses the mind and soul so lovingly!

before the falling of he sun, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

oh my! how wonderful, every time i read your poem i feel like i have flow to the heaven and angels are singing a breathtaking melody....amazing mam bravo