Sunday, April 18, 2010

Lie To Me Now! Comments

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I wanna hear it,
Tell me now,
Or I swear I'll cripple you.
You never learn, you b***h!
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Adrian Cordova
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Lynn Glover 19 April 2010

I'm not into profanity in poetry. I hope you will get a new vision on this part of your writing. Other than that the poem is O.K. Your friend Lynn

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Emma Adamyan 19 April 2010

oh yes what a passion guy.... y im not at least 18 :) and seriously the poem like a lighting. fast, penetrating, hurting sweetly

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BLACK is BEAUTIFUL 18 April 2010

wow! You had alot to say. I was going through the motions with you. PEACE

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