Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Lie To Live Comments

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Joshua Postma
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Chinedu Dike 22 October 2015

Between truth and falsehood, there's seriously conflict. To support and uphold one is to overthrow and jettison the other, but ultimately truth shall prevail in the end. Living a lie is a sign of lack of confidence in oneself, . A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Definitely a good poem to share on the cite. Thanks Joshua. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Joshua Postma 26 October 2015

thank you so much ill give it a read

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Fabrizio Frosini 06 October 2015

Katherine's comment can speak for me, too.. Thanks both of you: Joshua & Katherine.. ;) Cheers P.S.: WELCOME, Joshua, and.. keep on writing..

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Katherine Shaw 06 October 2015

Most of my friends live in their own litle bubble, they don't belong on the same page, they are at the begining of the book and won't dare move on. Me...I'm in the middle of the book and hope to get to the ending in the not to distant future. My so called friends lie about their lives to make it sound more interesting. They don't lie to me but lie to themselves. It's a big world out there and they are content living on one page...Go explore the book, read all the lines, words and chapters, This was a great read. Thanks. Please pop by and read some of my work if you have time. :)

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